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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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However, there are a couple things I would like to comment on. Firstly, although I love the attempt at perspective, it does look a little odd. Something within the angle feels off. Secondly, the shading under the shorts seems really out of place. The piece in general lacks a strong form of shading, carrying over the classic style of flat pop art. So therefore, the darkness under the shorts really draws attention to the wrong spot and seems out of place.
And lastly, although the picture does well in the current colour scheme, it seems to lack a certain focal point or even an avid focal point. Perhaps brightening the colours on the character would help make her "pop" out more and really bring more attention to her.
Other than those minor things, the piece is extremely well done. It shows remarkable talent in human anatomy and personality and control in drawing and colour. You've created something wonderful here, and I hope to see more of this vintage style from you in the future! keep up the spectacular work!
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