Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
July 27, 2012
Image Size
1.2 MB
Resolution
1600×2358
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
621
Favourites
33 (who?)
Comments
20

License

Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
×
Live the oldies by AnaDalle Live the oldies by AnaDalle
Edited: I changed the text because it was generating some rejection even though it had no particular meaning.

Enjoy!
Add a Comment:
 
:icontherockmonster:
First, let me say, wonderful piece! I really adore the vintage style, the classic pin up character and the ice cream shop colour scheme! It's all very well put together and carries a very nice sense of style and attitude. You've been able to nail down the characteristics of the character and it shows in everything from the expression to her clothing style.
However, there are a couple things I would like to comment on. Firstly, although I love the attempt at perspective, it does look a little odd. Something within the angle feels off. Secondly, the shading under the shorts seems really out of place. The piece in general lacks a strong form of shading, carrying over the classic style of flat pop art. So therefore, the darkness under the shorts really draws attention to the wrong spot and seems out of place.
And lastly, although the picture does well in the current colour scheme, it seems to lack a certain focal point or even an avid focal point. Perhaps brightening the colours on the character would help make her "pop" out more and really bring more attention to her.
Other than those minor things, the piece is extremely well done. It shows remarkable talent in human anatomy and personality and control in drawing and colour. You've created something wonderful here, and I hope to see more of this vintage style from you in the future! keep up the spectacular work! :)
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
5 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconmoon-dazzle:
Moon-DaZzLe Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your style! What program do you use?
Reply
:iconanadalle:
AnaDalle Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you. I use Photoshop, but I want to learn Corel Painter someday! (:
Reply
:iconmoon-dazzle:
Moon-DaZzLe Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I've heard Corel is really cool. Someday... *stars off into distance* ahaha XD
Reply
:iconanadalle:
AnaDalle Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hahaha, you should try! (and me too)
Reply
:iconmoon-dazzle:
Moon-DaZzLe Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes! If I ever have enough money to get it, I probably will~
Reply
:icondrkonkers:
drkonkers Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
beautiful as ever! :3 I love how you use colors to make these pieces!
Reply
:iconanadalle:
AnaDalle Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thank you ^^
Reply
:icondestinydecade:
DestinyDecade Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is really nice. Well done Ana. :)
Reply
:iconanadalle:
AnaDalle Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thank you as always ^^
Reply
:icondestinydecade:
DestinyDecade Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome.
Reply
Add a Comment: