First, let me say, wonderful piece! I really adore the vintage style, the classic pin up character and the ice cream shop colour scheme! It's all very well put together and carries a very nice sense of style and attitude. You've been able to nail down the characteristics of the character and it shows in everything from the expression to her clothing style. However, there are a couple things I would like to comment on. Firstly, although I love the attempt at perspective, it does look a little odd. Something within the angle feels off. Secondly, the shading under the shorts seems really out of place. The piece in general lacks a strong form of shading, carrying over the classic style of flat pop art. So therefore, the darkness under the shorts really draws attention to the wrong spot and seems out of place. And lastly, although the picture does well in the current colour scheme, it seems to lack a certain focal point or even an avid focal point. Perhaps brightening the colours on the character would help make her "pop" out more and really bring more attention to her. Other than those minor things, the piece is extremely well done. It shows remarkable talent in human anatomy and personality and control in drawing and colour. You've created something wonderful here, and I hope to see more of this vintage style from you in the future! keep up the spectacular work!
I wonder if its the prespective, but the proportions seem a bit strange? if you cover the bottom half of her body(bottom of tank top), it looks great if you cover the top half it's still okay , but when it is together,,, idk